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Breathe in.
Sidled, running down your arm,
Resting sweetly in your palm.
Pause.
Ready?

Calming hands caress you,
As judging eyes adorn your duty jacket.
Whipping lightly in the breeze.
Long coat tails, sit and stare,
The pistol aimed, through solid air,
It's down to you.
Just don't care.
For a second.

And it'll all be over.

The Sergeant,
Stares ahead.
Blankly.
The victim... no, that's not right.
The soldiers eyes,
Deer-caught-in-headlight eyes screaming.

Yelling, yearning,
Bleeding.

Can you pull the trigger?
Pull the trigger?
The trigger.

All that stands between you,
Innocence,
And glory.

The whizzing bang of gunfire makes the choice.
You trade yourself for glory.
Your innocence is lost.

The murderers glare.
Just another thing to hide behind these hazel eyes?
Are you ready?
Aim.
Breathe out.

Fire.
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~Alice-Underground Sep 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
like reading poetry. It flows well.
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:iconcorvid-stealer:
Expertly done. No criticism today.
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:icontwilights-rest:
Thank you very much, Corvid : )
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~candygirl101010 Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
o wow i love it i actully almost cryed i love it its breth takeing especially the end but i must say it was a bit hard 2 get into it in the begining i still love it good job
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:icontwilights-rest:
Thanks : ) I'm glad you liked it so much : D
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~candygirl101010 Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
np i hope 2 reed more <3
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